Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

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Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by LeoWu » Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:41 am

This FF is Based On maplestory and a mix of one of my Fav Manga! ENJOY!

She Kissed me.
That was it. That Second. That minute.
My Eyes Widened. I had the Dart in my hand.

Thats right.
It will all be over if I just stab her with this. Everything.
While I was thinking about that,

The girl
Whispered
...


"You didn't stab me.
That's The Future."

Its short so i'll start the First Chapter Right away!
Last edited by LeoWu on Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:49 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by Gatorade » Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:43 am

Nice.
Sounds scary,like Twilight. (gatorade-2)

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by LeoWu » Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:50 am

Gatorade wrote:Nice.
Sounds scary,like Twilight. (gatorade-2)


WTF TWILIGHT?
O_O dude..
That Seriously Hurt my Feelings.
TWILIGHT?
..
Im going into a corner and start sobbing.

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by Gatorade » Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:54 am

Sorry dude.
But,is there going to be sign-ups?

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by LeoWu » Thu Jan 21, 2010 1:04 am

Gatorade wrote:Sorry dude.
But,is there going to be sign-ups?


Oh..
Right.. Sign-ups..
Kk i'll make one.

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by chobbilight » Thu Jan 21, 2010 9:09 pm

LeoWu wrote:
Gatorade wrote:Nice.
Sounds scary,like Twilight. (gatorade-2)


WTF TWILIGHT?
O_O dude..
That Seriously Hurt my Feelings.
TWILIGHT?
..
Im going into a corner and start sobbing.

....dont offend leowu like that
your can hurt his feelings if you compare his ff with that crappy movie

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by LeoWu » Fri Jan 22, 2010 12:45 am

chobbilight wrote:
LeoWu wrote:
Gatorade wrote:Nice.
Sounds scary,like Twilight. (gatorade-2)


WTF TWILIGHT?
O_O dude..
That Seriously Hurt my Feelings.
TWILIGHT?
..
Im going into a corner and start sobbing.

....dont offend leowu like that
your can hurt his feelings if you compare his ff with that crappy movie


I wouldn't use crappy
i would use
TERRIBLE HORRIBLE JUST TOTTALY PIECE OF CRAP

Movie.
Thats what i think

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by redshyguy » Fri Jan 22, 2010 3:11 am

Nice leo (skygar9-4) its mysterious

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Post by LeoWu » Fri Jan 22, 2010 4:27 am

redshyguy wrote:Nice leo (skygar9-4) its mysterious

( (skygar9-4) i think i just..
uhh ohh
gotta go..

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by EmberSparks » Fri Jan 22, 2010 12:23 pm

LeoWu wrote:
redshyguy wrote:Nice leo (skygar9-4) its mysterious

( (skygar9-4) i think i just..
uhh ohh
gotta go..

...that was random

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by Dracoplasm » Sat Jan 23, 2010 12:34 am

.....
Why cant we Offend LeoWu when he flames other ppl's fanfics?

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by jonlin » Sat Jan 23, 2010 12:46 am

This is basically his theory:

He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.

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Post by pvtsharp » Sat Jan 23, 2010 1:17 am

jonlin wrote:This is basically his theory:

He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.


Why cant someone just teasr his head off (gatorade-2)

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Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 23, 2010 1:35 am

pvtsharp wrote:
jonlin wrote:This is basically his theory:

He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.


Why cant someone just teasr his head off (gatorade-2)

On it.
*Grabs Leo's head*

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by pvtsharp » Sat Jan 23, 2010 1:39 am

MsMeowzers wrote:
pvtsharp wrote:
jonlin wrote:This is basically his theory:

He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.


Why cant someone just teasr his head off (gatorade-2)

On it.
*Grabs Leo's head*


Need help?
*takes out a chainsaw*

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by LeoWu » Sat Jan 23, 2010 5:37 am

Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by EmberSparks » Sat Jan 23, 2010 10:30 am

LeoWu wrote:Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0

Rubbish post.
BTW at least he's honest when he reviews your FF (actually I think he thinks we're all crap).....
But he rarely gives constructive criticsm (<I think I spelled it wrong)

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by chobbilight » Sat Jan 23, 2010 1:06 pm

LeoWu wrote:Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0

i forgot you were also a spammer/random

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by LeoWu » Sat Jan 23, 2010 5:32 pm

chobbilight wrote:
LeoWu wrote:Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0

i forgot you were also a spammer/random


....
Koff koff*
"Hypocrite"
...

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Post by Zaylo » Sat Jan 23, 2010 9:45 pm

LeoWu wrote:Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0

Number 1?

Who's the father of the FF section?

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