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FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by jonlin » Wed Feb 18, 2009 4:02 am

A Noob's Life 9
I decided to finally do this i guess =p
btw i know there are a few spelling errors.

"GO!" the keeper commanded. All of a sudden I felt a sucking feeling and woke up. I looked around, at Ray snoring, Connor holding onto a dagger and waving it around in it's sheath while he appeared to be sleeping still and austin just lying there. I wondered what the mysterious staff the keeper had been holding was and couldn't fall asleep so I went to check in Grendel the Really Old's library. I got up, got dressed and walked out of the tent.

As I was walking beetween the tents toward grendel's Pavilion, when I saw a bunch of monsters rushing toward the camps. but then when I looked at the reporting tower, I saw a Magician with a Crystal Ilbi inbeetween their eyes. I suddenly realized what this meant and ran through camp yelling for help defending camp. As Many Warriors, Bowmen, Magicians and Thief's wandered out of their tents I ran towards the approaching monsters. I then saw the rest of my team running from our tent and called out to them. We met up, Ray used Haste and we all ran at top speed toward the edge of camp. We got there just in time to meet an army of Crimson balrogs, JR. Balrogs, werewolfs, zombies, Lupins, golems and Iron hogs.

I ran forward, swinging a lightning charged hammer and using my new skills. I looked over and saw Connor Shout and start charging up his combo by slashing left and right. Then Austin saved me from a monster by summoning a puppet to take my damage and firing a strafe taking two balrog's directly in the head and chest. I then turned my attention back to the monsters and smashed a crimson balrog's head in with a charged attack. Behind it another crimson balrog was charging a magic attack and about to kill me when it got sliced in half and I saw Ray land.

"Thanks!" I yelled at Ray and then smashed a golem to pieces with my hammer.

"No Problem man!" said Ray as he pulled his dagger out of a werewolf.

We continued fighting monsters for a few more minutes, and then I heard an announcement over the speaker: "ALL SQUADS REPORT TO THE OPEN EDGE OF CAMP! I REPEAT, ALL SQUADS REPORT TO THE OPEN EDGE OF CAMP!" I realized that was where we were and got renewed energy. I smashed the golem in front of me to pieces and then saved austin by smashing the crimson balrog attacking him's skull in. Austin then used Arrow Storm to kill all the monsters surronding Ray and Connor, who were back to-back fighting. Then other squad's rushed past us and took on the rest of the monsters.

"Phew!" Connor said after gasping for air for a minute or so.

"I wonder why it took so long to get help?" Austin asked.

"Oh well, at least we got help, right?" I replied.

"Hey, after all this fighting and with the passes and all we are all level 190!" Ray exclaimed.

"Oh wow, you're right!" That was Connor again. We all checked, and we really were level 190!

"Well what are we standing here for, we have to get our fourth jobs!" I declared "Meet back at the tent, O.k.?"

After that we all went to our job masters, Connor and I walking together as we were both warriors.

"Jeez some weird night huh? Connor asked.

"Yah." I said, "Why, with all this excitement I had forgotten about that staff!"

"What staff?" Connor asked, confused.

"Oh right, you don't know." I said and then explained My dream to connor.

"Well that is really weird huh, Now I'm curious too." Connor said finally, "We will check it out after we get our fourth jobs" Speaking of fourth jobs, by now we were at Dances with Balrog's Pavilion. We Went in his Pavilion and tested for our fourth job, passed and went back to the tent. Once we got back to the tent I told Austin and Ray about my dream and the staff and we all went out of the tent to go to Grendel the Really Old's Pavilion.

We all walked to Grendel the Really Old's Pavilion and once there aksed to use his library. He said we could so we went into his library and started searching through books for the staff as I had described it. After about an hour of looking, Ray called us over to look at something. He had a book in his hand and on the open page was a picture of that staff! on the other side of he page there was a description.

The Staff Of The Keeper
This is the legendary object called the staff of the Keeper, who is a god who is supposed to keep the safety of the world. This staff has many aical properties, and each rune inscribed represents an ability.

"Well, now we know what it is we can o back to our tent right?" Said Connor, Yawning.

"Yep." I said and we went out of the Pavilion. But as we were walking back there was a slight rasp of a dagger coming out of it's sheath and a glint of a throwing star.

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Re: FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by Zaylo » Wed Feb 18, 2009 1:29 pm

your getting better

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Re: FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by SDValentine » Wed Feb 18, 2009 4:03 pm

It was...
Great =D!

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Re: FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by jonlin » Wed Feb 18, 2009 9:35 pm

No, Zaylo I just decided to try for once =p

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Re: FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by synn90210 » Thu Feb 19, 2009 9:49 pm

wow those passes own. holy power leveling batman (F6)

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Re: FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by Coolboy994 » Thu Feb 19, 2009 10:00 pm

It's pretty good. =)

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Re: FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by chatwindow » Thu Feb 19, 2009 11:07 pm

that was interesting (F2)

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Re: FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by jonlin » Fri Feb 20, 2009 12:54 am

yay ^^
oh and btw they killed like 3000 monsters, no wonder they'll be a high level with those passes

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Re: FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by Duality » Mon Jun 15, 2009 1:06 am

Can you link me to like ch4 6 7 8 pliz

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Re: FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by jonlin » Mon Jun 15, 2009 2:38 am

link you mean? the links to all my chapters are in the two threads below
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http://mapletalk.2ksite.com/regarding-a ... e-t21.html

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Re: FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by Mizuky » Mon Jun 15, 2009 3:03 am

(F6) its great (F2)

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Re: FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by Duality » Mon Jun 15, 2009 2:50 pm

I liked this chapter

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Re: FINALY A NOOB'S LIFE 9

Post by jonlin » Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:09 pm

thanks :D i look back and I find all the mistake's in my story now >.<

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