Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
This FF is Based On maplestory and a mix of one of my Fav Manga! ENJOY!
She Kissed me.
That was it. That Second. That minute.
My Eyes Widened. I had the Dart in my hand.
Thats right.
It will all be over if I just stab her with this. Everything.
While I was thinking about that,
The girl
Whispered
...
"You didn't stab me.
That's The Future."
Its short so i'll start the First Chapter Right away!
She Kissed me.
That was it. That Second. That minute.
My Eyes Widened. I had the Dart in my hand.
Thats right.
It will all be over if I just stab her with this. Everything.
While I was thinking about that,
The girl
Whispered
...
"You didn't stab me.
That's The Future."
Its short so i'll start the First Chapter Right away!
Last edited by LeoWu on Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:49 am, edited 1 time in total.
Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
Nice.
Sounds scary,like Twilight.
Sounds scary,like Twilight.

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
Gatorade wrote:Nice.
Sounds scary,like Twilight.
WTF TWILIGHT?
O_O dude..
That Seriously Hurt my Feelings.
TWILIGHT?
..
Im going into a corner and start sobbing.
Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
Sorry dude.
But,is there going to be sign-ups?
But,is there going to be sign-ups?
Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
Gatorade wrote:Sorry dude.
But,is there going to be sign-ups?
Oh..
Right.. Sign-ups..
Kk i'll make one.
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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
LeoWu wrote:Gatorade wrote:Nice.
Sounds scary,like Twilight.
WTF TWILIGHT?
O_O dude..
That Seriously Hurt my Feelings.
TWILIGHT?
..
Im going into a corner and start sobbing.
....dont offend leowu like that
your can hurt his feelings if you compare his ff with that crappy movie
Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
chobbilight wrote:LeoWu wrote:Gatorade wrote:Nice.
Sounds scary,like Twilight.
WTF TWILIGHT?
O_O dude..
That Seriously Hurt my Feelings.
TWILIGHT?
..
Im going into a corner and start sobbing.
....dont offend leowu like that
your can hurt his feelings if you compare his ff with that crappy movie
I wouldn't use crappy
i would use
TERRIBLE HORRIBLE JUST TOTTALY PIECE OF CRAP
Movie.
Thats what i think
Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
Nice leo
its mysterious

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
redshyguy wrote:Nice leoits mysterious
(

uhh ohh
gotta go..
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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
LeoWu wrote:redshyguy wrote:Nice leoits mysterious
(i think i just..
uhh ohh
gotta go..
...that was random
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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
.....
Why cant we Offend LeoWu when he flames other ppl's fanfics?
Why cant we Offend LeoWu when he flames other ppl's fanfics?
Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
This is basically his theory:
He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.
He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.
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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
jonlin wrote:This is basically his theory:
He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.
Why cant someone just teasr his head off

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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
pvtsharp wrote:jonlin wrote:This is basically his theory:
He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.
Why cant someone just teasr his head off
On it.
*Grabs Leo's head*
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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
MsMeowzers wrote:pvtsharp wrote:jonlin wrote:This is basically his theory:
He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.
Why cant someone just teasr his head off
On it.
*Grabs Leo's head*
Need help?
*takes out a chainsaw*
Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0
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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
LeoWu wrote:Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0
Rubbish post.
BTW at least he's honest when he reviews your FF (actually I think he thinks we're all crap).....
But he rarely gives constructive criticsm (<I think I spelled it wrong)
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Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
LeoWu wrote:Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0
i forgot you were also a spammer/random
Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
chobbilight wrote:LeoWu wrote:Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0
i forgot you were also a spammer/random
....
Koff koff*
"Hypocrite"
...
Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge
LeoWu wrote:Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0
Number 1?
Who's the father of the FF section?