Heroes of Time:Chapter 2

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Heroes of Time:Chapter 2

Post by Gatorade » Sat Feb 27, 2010 6:45 pm

Lol. I need to catch up on my fanfics so..here I go.

Chapter 1


Kibagami shouted,"Shonen Spirit!" A motorbike appeared out of no where. As Crystal and Kite looked at the bike they both exclaimed ,'Holy Crap!"

"Get On!",shouted Kibagami. As Kibagami started the motorbike Gator thought,"It's glad to see you again,Kibamgai.

Gator asked,"Where the hell are we going?" Kibagami replied,"Remember that clubhouse we built as kids?"

"Yes,always." Gator replied back. "Well,it still there and that's were we're going." shouted Kibagami as he made a sharp turn.

Half an hour passed and they arrived at the clubhouse. Gator hurriedly went into the clubhouse and looked at some picture of Kibagami and him. Kibagami made a smirk.

As Crystal went to go look at the pictures that Gator was looking at Crystal asked,"Is that you and Kibagami?"

"Yes,yes it is." stated Gator. Kite asked Gator for a drink but Gator was to busy looking at pictures so Kite went to Kibagami.

"Sheesh,do you have anything to drink around here?" asked Kite as he groaned. "Yeah,want a coke?" Kibagami replied as he went to get a coke for himself.

"YES PLEASE!" Kite exclaimed as he moaned some more. As Kite drank the whole can of coke he went outside.

"Where you going?" asked Gator. "To take a pee." replied Kite. "Yuck,make sure nobody steps on your pee." said Gator..

"HELP!!!" shouted Kite. The team went outside. Someone had a big ship and had stuffed Kite inside a sack.

"Who are you!?!?" exclaimed Crystal. "My name is Chobbilight, and I come to rule the world!" exclaimed Chobbilight.

"Chobbilight is that you?" asked Kibagami and Gator at the same time. Chobbilight was one of their best friends as a kid.

"Chobbilight,please don't take Kite!" shouted Gator. Chobbilight didn't listen and took Kite away.

"What are we going to do?" Gator thought. "We need Kite..."



To be continued....
LOL I KNOW I SUCK!!!


CREDITS:
Crystal - MsMeowzers
Kite - PvtSharp
Gator - me
Kibagami - EmberSparks
Chobbilight - Chobbilight

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Re: Heroes of Time:Chapter 2

Post by steveking99 » Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:38 am

Its like iCarly in book form.
6/10

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Re: Heroes of Time:Chapter 2

Post by Zaylo » Sun Feb 28, 2010 11:45 am

My name is Chobbilight!
Chobbilight is that you?

Lol he just introduced himself why would they question it?
Z: Hey Gillian I'm Zay
G: Omg Zaylo is that you?!

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Re: Heroes of Time:Chapter 2

Post by steveking99 » Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:35 am

Zaylo wrote:My name is Chobbilight!
Chobbilight is that you?

Lol he just introduced himself why would they question it?
Z: Hey Gillian I'm Zay
G: Omg Zaylo is that you?!

ROFLMAO

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Re: Heroes of Time:Chapter 2

Post by Dracoplasm » Fri Mar 19, 2010 11:52 pm

I lol'd when Zaylo said that

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Re: Heroes of Time:Chapter 2

Post by jonlin » Sat Mar 20, 2010 12:49 pm

Zaylo wrote:My name is Chobbilight!
Chobbilight is that you?

Lol he just introduced himself why would they question it?
Z: Hey Gillian I'm Zay
G: Omg Zaylo is that you?!


"Chobbilight is that you?" asked Kibagami and Gator at the same time. Chobbilight was one of their best friends as a kid.


was the sentence before.... and this suggests that they haven't seen him since they were kids. thus it would be acceptable to respond in that fashion to his statement, as if they were wondering because of how much he changed.

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