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Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:41 am
by LeoWu
This FF is Based On maplestory and a mix of one of my Fav Manga! ENJOY!

She Kissed me.
That was it. That Second. That minute.
My Eyes Widened. I had the Dart in my hand.

Thats right.
It will all be over if I just stab her with this. Everything.
While I was thinking about that,

The girl
Whispered
...


"You didn't stab me.
That's The Future."

Its short so i'll start the First Chapter Right away!

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:43 am
by Gatorade
Nice.
Sounds scary,like Twilight. (gatorade-2)

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:50 am
by LeoWu
Gatorade wrote:Nice.
Sounds scary,like Twilight. (gatorade-2)


WTF TWILIGHT?
O_O dude..
That Seriously Hurt my Feelings.
TWILIGHT?
..
Im going into a corner and start sobbing.

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:54 am
by Gatorade
Sorry dude.
But,is there going to be sign-ups?

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 1:04 am
by LeoWu
Gatorade wrote:Sorry dude.
But,is there going to be sign-ups?


Oh..
Right.. Sign-ups..
Kk i'll make one.

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 9:09 pm
by chobbilight
LeoWu wrote:
Gatorade wrote:Nice.
Sounds scary,like Twilight. (gatorade-2)


WTF TWILIGHT?
O_O dude..
That Seriously Hurt my Feelings.
TWILIGHT?
..
Im going into a corner and start sobbing.

....dont offend leowu like that
your can hurt his feelings if you compare his ff with that crappy movie

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 12:45 am
by LeoWu
chobbilight wrote:
LeoWu wrote:
Gatorade wrote:Nice.
Sounds scary,like Twilight. (gatorade-2)


WTF TWILIGHT?
O_O dude..
That Seriously Hurt my Feelings.
TWILIGHT?
..
Im going into a corner and start sobbing.

....dont offend leowu like that
your can hurt his feelings if you compare his ff with that crappy movie


I wouldn't use crappy
i would use
TERRIBLE HORRIBLE JUST TOTTALY PIECE OF CRAP

Movie.
Thats what i think

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 3:11 am
by redshyguy
Nice leo (skygar9-4) its mysterious

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 4:27 am
by LeoWu
redshyguy wrote:Nice leo (skygar9-4) its mysterious

( (skygar9-4) i think i just..
uhh ohh
gotta go..

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 12:23 pm
by EmberSparks
LeoWu wrote:
redshyguy wrote:Nice leo (skygar9-4) its mysterious

( (skygar9-4) i think i just..
uhh ohh
gotta go..

...that was random

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 12:34 am
by Dracoplasm
.....
Why cant we Offend LeoWu when he flames other ppl's fanfics?

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 12:46 am
by jonlin
This is basically his theory:

He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 1:17 am
by pvtsharp
jonlin wrote:This is basically his theory:

He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.


Why cant someone just teasr his head off (gatorade-2)

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 1:35 am
by MsMeowzers
pvtsharp wrote:
jonlin wrote:This is basically his theory:

He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.


Why cant someone just teasr his head off (gatorade-2)

On it.
*Grabs Leo's head*

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 1:39 am
by pvtsharp
MsMeowzers wrote:
pvtsharp wrote:
jonlin wrote:This is basically his theory:

He is much better at writing than everyone but maybe 2-3 people on this site. He thereore has the right to flame everyone else.


Why cant someone just teasr his head off (gatorade-2)

On it.
*Grabs Leo's head*


Need help?
*takes out a chainsaw*

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 5:37 am
by LeoWu
Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 10:30 am
by EmberSparks
LeoWu wrote:Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0

Rubbish post.
BTW at least he's honest when he reviews your FF (actually I think he thinks we're all crap).....
But he rarely gives constructive criticsm (<I think I spelled it wrong)

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 1:06 pm
by chobbilight
LeoWu wrote:Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0

i forgot you were also a spammer/random

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 5:32 pm
by LeoWu
chobbilight wrote:
LeoWu wrote:Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0

i forgot you were also a spammer/random


....
Koff koff*
"Hypocrite"
...

Re: Eyes of the Future. Prolouge

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 9:45 pm
by Zaylo
LeoWu wrote:Pfft
Ta da
Number "1"
guy is here the
guy
"Who can flame other people but cant be flamed"
Is here!
Noobies :)
Whatcha Say about that :p
Booz is awsome :0

Number 1?

Who's the father of the FF section?