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Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 7:02 pm
by zenopop
We set in kerning city, a thief paradise, many of the people are mean and only care for money, there are some noobs begging for meso pl0x nearby, when a huge boom scares them away. The boom sound was a door made of wood , and some metal. it slowly opens and we see Chob standing there in noobs clothing and a beginners knife.

" WTH, where did my gear go, Someones gonna get pwnd for stealing my gear" said chob angry. As he looked around to see all the people he remebered what GM Gilly called this place.

"hmm so this is Kerning city, seems like my type of place, a bunch of people to fight " said chob with a smile on his face.

"Now how should i begin," he thought and soon could her something coming closer.

Yay something to fight, Thought chob, as the noise got closer he turned and thrust his knife into the approaching thing, when a cloud of smoke appeared he stood in alert mode when he began to hear a voice.

"wow that was close for a noob you almost got me " soon the voice began to laugh. "Im dark Lord, ill be your start on your journey "he said with a supposed smile, because he looked like an assassin, all covered in black and wearing a mask.

" alright what should i do first, can i fight some hard monsters, or save a princess who will reward me with mesos or kisses" said chob as he daydreamed of saving a princess and getting a lot of mesos.

" No, No, youll begin by fighting stumps. you might have fought them at the school"

"i have, but there easy cant i get a a better monster, i want to get as strong as possible."

Dark Lord laughed, " your to weak to take on the hardest monster know to us Horntail"

" Horntails not a name for a school its a monster," he looked interested in fighting it.

"for now i jsut want to to kill stumps alright now go, there over there in the east, chob looked where he was pointing . and looked happy at starting his quest,

"alright I'm off" and with that and a cloud of duct chob was gone

" i hope he can help save the world, you better be right Gilly." Dark Lord turned and vanished in a flash.

Chob continues to go east when he sees a person in front of him, he was wearing all black, from his top hat to his shoes and vampire cape. and his sad faced mask with red eyes appearing from each hole

"GET OUTTA THE WAY" he yells at the person, when he doesn't move chob decides to just run him down.

"fine have it your way im going to run you over hahaha" as he said that the person looked over his shoulder and seem to be glaring at chob, soon chob felt a bunch of pressure over him like an invisible blanket that he couldn't escape from. it was slowing him down by a lot, when he couldn't handle it he threw a rock at the person to make him stop doing this, as he thew it he heard foot steps behind him,

"crap must be his henchmen about to kill me, i need help," but he heard a laugh from behind, and he remembered it was the dark lords laugh, so he turned around and saw him running tword him, soon he was besides chob yelling at the masked figure.

"leave him alone, do it now or ill get the others and well finish this here and now" yelled dark lord. Soon the masked figure jumped into the air and disappeared, without a trace. As chob stood up he asked who that was,

" No one just a high level person being a jerk," said the dark lord

"nothing to worry about now go fight the stumps" Chob couldnt stop thinking about the person as he got up and walked slowly tword the east looking for stumps,

"that power, he could have killed me anytime he wanted to, i could have died at any second, i i i cant beat him, i cant be as strong as him, he will kill me," said chob, but he remembered his friends and how they promissed to see each other again one day, then chob smiled and said.

" i will be strong, ill show you guys how strong i can be." with taht he smiled and began to run tword the east to kill the stumps.

TO BE CONTINUED =D
HOPE YOU GUYS LIKED IT

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 9:04 pm
by jonlin
lol, mapletalk links? good but I was a bit confused at some parts, grammar check?

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 9:36 pm
by poke1024
yup, just trying to spread the word (F2)

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 10:28 pm
by zenopop
i used grammar check i must have to use simpler words (JK)

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:34 am
by chobbilight
lolz i like that chob character he makes me think of myself

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:06 am
by Mizuky
chobbilight wrote:lolz i like that chob character he makes me think of myself



lol btw gratz on legend rank (heart) (eek)

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 2:49 pm
by jonlin
hey, your right he;s got the legend rank :D

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 3:49 pm
by zenopop
i say we stop him before he gets to powerful

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 4:11 pm
by poke1024
i agree, everyone, report him!!!!!! (hothead) jk

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:35 pm
by chobbilight
poke1024 wrote:i agree, everyone, report him!!!!!! (hothead) jk

hey off topic get back on topic


zeno who inspired you of making that chob character

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:49 pm
by jonlin
it's the apocalypse D: chobbi reprimanded us!

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 4:20 pm
by poke1024
chobbi!!! (hothead)

stop posting so we can catch up

zeno plz write more

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 3:11 pm
by chobbilight
as you might know i reduced my posting for you guys 2 catch up but ill stop cause jonlin got 1000 post under me...ill check next month when you guys are like 2500

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 2:57 pm
by poke1024
lol, everyone, take the time to over take chobbi

when are u gonna write more zeno?

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 5:19 am
by chobbilight
poke1024 wrote:lol, everyone, take the time to over take chobbi

when are u gonna write more zeno?

yeah but second thought what do i need 2 do when i get bored?

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 6:34 pm
by zenopop
ill wright more later im busy with finding work this summer and i just make the characters from experience, like your cool yet stuborn

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 3:21 pm
by poke1024
chobbilight wrote:
poke1024 wrote:lol, everyone, take the time to over take chobbi

when are u gonna write more zeno?

yeah but second thought what do i need 2 do when i get bored?


umm, u read?

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 4:20 pm
by jonlin
lol anyways, guys, let's stop talking here. it IS a fanfiction, not a random thread where you talk about w/e

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 2:12 pm
by poke1024
yup, listen to jonlin

(F2)

Re: Maple Days Ch3

Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 4:24 pm
by jonlin
.... you just completely missed the point. you don't need to post here? DON'T.